Case

Not happy with the structure of my @130story submission - what does the 'it' relate to, the dirt? the case? the clasp? Not sure how to fix.

He stared at the cassette's contents, the large iron oxide flakes & the remaining clear tape. The data trail had disintegrated. @130story

..they needed to know why the droidslave architects had built the backdoor in them..and in what case it was meant to be deployed..@130story

Thought crime: animal cruelty. As Schrödinger's fate was declared he was reassured that outside it was still an open-and-shut case @130story